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In a land of
dreams and dust:

the curve of
a half-hazed sun,

devoured.
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014   Writer
Fantastic!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Professional Writer
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HippieHebe Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful :heart:
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Adonael Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice double entendre in dust and the last word is very strong, resonant.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014   Writer
Thank you! :)
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Adonael Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No worries!
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riparii Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Oh I missed this, it's lovely. Congratulations.
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013   Writer
Thank you, on both counts. :heart:!
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IRAtheIV Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013   Traditional Artist
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013   Writer
Wow, thank you! :thanks: :heart:
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013   Writer
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! :love:
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013   Writer
You're very welcome! :D
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013   Writer
:tighthug:
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013   Writer
:glomp:
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This has been Featured in :iconpoeticalcondition: as one of our Featured works in July.

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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013   Writer
Wow, thank you so much! :happybounce: :heart:
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, the imagery in this is lovely. :D
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013   Writer
I'm glad you think so! :tighthug:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013   Writer
Wow! That's simply stunning :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013   Writer
Thank you! :love:
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ThyPoetSorcerer Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think my heart just stopped.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013   Writer
:) :heart:
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cality Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What a stunningly vivid image. Beautifully done! :clap:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much, darling - glad you like it! :huggle:
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cality Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :tighthug:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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gummyrabbit Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Student Writer
This is great!  I feel like I'm there, like I could taste the burning heat.  Wonderfully evocative for such few words.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013   Writer
What a fantastic complement. :love: So glad you like it, thanks! :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
Wow. :love:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013   Writer
:heart:!
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VeiledPoet Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There is a lot of definition in the poem's ambiguity (oxymoronic, I know).
Short and very sweet.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013   Writer
Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it! :happybounce: :heart:
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That one word, "devoured", attaches a whole other level of intensity to this. I love the whole thing :D
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! Glad you love it! :happybounce: :heart:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013   Writer
The imagery in this is so fantastic and powerful that you simply cannot read this poem and feel its presence. One of my favorites by you, definitely.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013   Writer
What an amazing comment - you are too kind. Glad you like it! :hug:
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh...^^ Hehe^^ Good I could help you :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013   Writer
:tighthug:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! :happybounce: :heart:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
You're welcome.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013   Writer
:thanks:
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, impressive, I count not even 20 words and there is a whole setting appearing in my head :) like a desert city or something like that as you could find in 1001 Night. Though, Midas tells another story, eh? *which reminds me once again of Percy Jackson or rather Heroes of Olympus*
I love the first two and the last line. Land of dreams and dust sounds just epic and devoured has something powerful and dark, so its like matching, the golden, holy land vs. devoured, black, dark, but mighty, like a black hole. :) Am I going a little far with my interpretation? I think so...
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013   Writer
You just about have me convinced to read those books now, haha. :P Thank you very much! No, I don't think you're going too far at all - in fact, I think you're quite insightful. I'm glad you like it. :happybounce: :heart:
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student General Artist
You mean 1001 Nights? The stories are great^^
Have fun while reading^^
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013   Writer
Percy Jackson, in fact. I agree that the 1001 Nights tales are amazing! :huggle:
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh^^That's good to hear^^Have fun! <3
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013   Writer
:tighthug:
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