Oh my goodness... I find something quite special in this poem! The birdsong.. you've read the poem of mine... and India.. I fell in love with this country, even though I've never been there. Lastly, the "blueberry smiles" verse kind of reminds me of my friend's ~Mercury-the-Queen poetry... and she's my favourite poet. Aside from this, this is such a gorgeous piece! Wonderful work.
Aah, thank you so much for reading this, and for the wonderful compliments! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I love India, also - I've never been there either, but one of my best friends spend four months volunteering in the country, and her photos and stories from her time there make me quite jealous. Thank you once again.
i can't tell you how much i love this. i especially love, "wet hair haloes and a restless route scrawled up arms and over hands," your words are amazing, i can really feel them.
Aside from this, this is such a gorgeous piece!