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There is birdsong and
sun-drenched long limbs,
sprawled across India green;

wet hair haloes and
a restless route scrawled
up arms and over hands.

There are blueberry smiles,
feet upon dashboards,
and city-light fireflies...

(And,
then there is you.
Always, always you.)
Summer. :)

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AnotherPassenger Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how simply gorgeous this is. Wonderful :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012   Writer
Ah, thank you so much! :heart:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
Oh my goodness... I find something quite special in this poem! :heart: The birdsong.. you've read the poem of mine... and India.. I fell in love with this country, even though I've never been there. Lastly, the "blueberry smiles" verse kind of reminds me of my friend's ~Mercury-the-Queen poetry... and she's my favourite poet.
Aside from this, this is such a gorgeous piece! :rose: Wonderful work.:clap:
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012   Writer
Aah, thank you so much for reading this, and for the wonderful compliments! :heart: I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I love India, also - I've never been there either, but one of my best friends spend four months volunteering in the country, and her photos and stories from her time there make me quite jealous. :) Thank you once again. :huggle:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
You're most welcome, when I have some free time finally I'll need to check out more of your works! :) It's a pleasure.:rose:
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012   Writer
:huggle:
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QueenOfQuills Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
Beautiful imagery, there's something really quirky about it at the same time!
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012   Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you think so. :aww:
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Wise-lies Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i can't tell you how much i love this. i especially love, "wet hair haloes and a restless route scrawled up arms and over hands," your words are amazing, i can really feel them. :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012   Writer
Aaah, thank you. :heart:
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OP1atedDreems Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student Writer
Gorgeous work. I love the way it sticks to the roof of my mouth as I say it aloud.
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012   Writer
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for reading, and for the compliment! :huggle:
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OP1atedDreems Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome.
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I liked the third stanza the most.

a nice piece on good times :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012   Writer
Thank you. :) :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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Stara-Aquila Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student Writer
I love the last bit. <3 <3 So much love.
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012   Writer
Thank you. :heart::heart:
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love how personal this is; it's full of so much character and it flows beautifully. :heart: Lovely work!
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much! You leave such lovely comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :huggle:
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. :)
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Oh my gosh, so vivid and romantic. I love this so much! :la: :heart: :squee:
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012   Writer
I'm glad you were able to envision it so. Thank you! :iconlawooplz:
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
My pleasure! :la: :heart:
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empty-lungs Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
asdfghjkl this is gorgey-porgey
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012   Writer
Thank you. :heart::heart:
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FallingAsleepTonight Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012   Writer
Oh this flows very nicely. I usually enjoy short poetry, but I wish this was longer because there is plenty of potential here :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012   Writer
Perhaps there is. :) I'm glad you enjoyed this - thank you for taking the time to read! :heart:
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FallingAsleepTonight Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012   Writer
You're very welcome.
When you have the time, I'd love your input on some of my poetry :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012   Writer
I'm on my phone at the moment or I'd take a look straight away, but I certainly will! :aww:
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FallingAsleepTonight Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012   Writer
Thanks!
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