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There is birdsong and
sun-drenched long limbs,
sprawled across India green;

wet hair haloes and
a restless route scrawled
up arms and over hands.

There are blueberry smiles,
feet upon dashboards,
and city-light fireflies...

(And,
then there is you.
Always, always you.)
Summer. :)

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AnotherPassenger Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how simply gorgeous this is. Wonderful :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012   Writer
Ah, thank you so much! :heart:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
Oh my goodness... I find something quite special in this poem! :heart: The birdsong.. you've read the poem of mine... and India.. I fell in love with this country, even though I've never been there. Lastly, the "blueberry smiles" verse kind of reminds me of my friend's ~Mercury-the-Queen poetry... and she's my favourite poet.
Aside from this, this is such a gorgeous piece! :rose: Wonderful work.:clap:
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012   Writer
Aah, thank you so much for reading this, and for the wonderful compliments! :heart: I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I love India, also - I've never been there either, but one of my best friends spend four months volunteering in the country, and her photos and stories from her time there make me quite jealous. :) Thank you once again. :huggle:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
You're most welcome, when I have some free time finally I'll need to check out more of your works! :) It's a pleasure.:rose:
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012   Writer
:huggle:
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QueenOfQuills Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
Beautiful imagery, there's something really quirky about it at the same time!
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012   Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you think so. :aww:
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Wise-lies Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i can't tell you how much i love this. i especially love, "wet hair haloes and a restless route scrawled up arms and over hands," your words are amazing, i can really feel them. :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012   Writer
Aaah, thank you. :heart:
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