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Scorpio's tail slips low—

a mari usque ad mare:
from sea to sea
over me, a devil in the sky above;

and the Huntress
peels dawn like an orange.


(Fling me
amongst the stars:

the Mad Queen's cosmic mirage.)
Venom & a golden chalice.
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orayx Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
"(Fling me
amongst the stars:

the Mad Queen's cosmic mirage.)" Heart 

you are a gifted poet! 

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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013   Writer
So sorry for the late reply, but thank you so much. Your lovely comments mean a lot. :heart:
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ThyPoetSorcerer Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely enchanting.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013   Writer
:heart:!
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cality Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love the opening line; the alliteration of 'Scorpio's' and 'slips', and the 'o' sounds, are just gorgeous. :clap:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm glad you like it! :tighthug: :heart:
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cality Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :huggle:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013   Writer
:tighthug:
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your cadence in this may as well've been dipped in honey.
This is absolutely gorgeous.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013   Writer
Eee, way to flatter a girl. ;)
Thank you very much. :tighthug: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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