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Find me sunken into the
lotus field, bathing skin silvergreen,
waist-deep and pink

in sunset, and we will cry:
for three-faced elephants,
for rain,

for the dancers threading grace
between their fingertips—
until I dress in the heaviness,

a sarong of heat.
I'm really am quite missing Cambodia. :heart:

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orayx Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
this poem is marvelous! beautiful imagery mixed with a message that lingers.
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013   Writer
This one is quite special to me, so I'm always overjoyed when others enjoy it too. Thanks so much! :rose:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"for the dancers threading grace
between their fingertips"

:heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013   Writer
:huggle: :heart:
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ssensory Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Student Writer
Pfft. I don't know why I didn't favorite this before.

Well, I fixed that. Fav'd it now. :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner May 11, 2013   Writer
:heart:!
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ssensory Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Writer
I can't believe I never read this before...
This poem is extremely beautiful and just perfect. I can feel one of those hot and moist rainy days from this poem, which is really interesting. Beautiful imagery. You really know how to find the perfect words.
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Concora Featured By Owner May 3, 2013   Writer
Wow, thank you so much for such a lovely comment! This piece is really quite special to me, so I'm glad you like it. :heart:
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013   Writer
...for the dancers threading grace / between their fingertips-- Just those lines are very beautiful.
It's a joy to read what surrounds them as well. Thank you. :+fav:
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013   Writer
No, thank you - Cambodia is my absolute favourite place in the world; I'm so glad to know I did it some justice. :hug: :heart:
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