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Find me sunken into the
lotus field, bathing skin silvergreen,
waist-deep and pink

in sunset, and we will cry:
for three-faced elephants,
for rain,

for the dancers threading grace
between their fingertips—
until I dress in the heaviness,

a sarong of heat.

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I'm really am quite missing Cambodia. :heart:

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=slowslicksnails May 11, 2013  Student Writer
Pfft. I don't know why I didn't favorite this before.

Well, I fixed that. Fav'd it now. :heart:
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*Concora May 11, 2013   Writer
:heart:!
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=slowslicksnails Apr 29, 2013  Student Writer
I can't believe I never read this before...
This poem is extremely beautiful and just perfect. I can feel one of those hot and moist rainy days from this poem, which is really interesting. Beautiful imagery. You really know how to find the perfect words.
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*Concora May 3, 2013   Writer
Wow, thank you so much for such a lovely comment! This piece is really quite special to me, so I'm glad you like it. :heart:
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*xlntwtch Apr 27, 2013   Writer
...for the dancers threading grace / between their fingertips-- Just those lines are very beautiful.
It's a joy to read what surrounds them as well. Thank you. :+fav:
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*Concora Apr 28, 2013   Writer
No, thank you - Cambodia is my absolute favourite place in the world; I'm so glad to know I did it some justice. :hug: :heart:
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*xlntwtch Apr 28, 2013   Writer
You gave it "justice," and beauty, too. :heart:
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~alexiscaitlinking Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Fantastic. I keep coming back to your poetry. It's imagery and emotion is phenomenal.
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*Concora Feb 24, 2013   Writer
Oh, that is such a complement. Thank you so much. I'm thrilled you enjoy my work. :heart:
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