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Bright-eyed,
bird-boned
whisper girl;

dark-dressed,
moon-backed
mistress of light.
Лилия / Liliya.
NaPoWriMo 11

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aprilwednesday Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014   Writer
this is enchanting. it sounds like you're describing someone right out of a fairytale :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014   Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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Adonael Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Using the verb 'whisper' as an adjective was a nice touch and seeing how small and fragile the poem appears, it suits the form too. Very effective.
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MrWootton Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Agreed, I really like the first stanza concluding with that label: "whisper girl"
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Sorry, that was twice, but at the first time I couldn't think of good words to underline my feelings towards it. Don't wonder, please :)
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Wonderful feeling included. It makes goose-bumps in the middle part and feels warm at the beginning and at the end also mystically, perhaps because of the word moon and mistress of light. :) I like it :)
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
An intriguing snippet. :) 
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013   Writer
Thank you! :)
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013   Writer
Hello (: I'm just stopping by to tell you that your beautiful work has been featured in my latest journal; [link] :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013   Writer
:heart:!
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