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The storm throws you to my door, drenched and bloodied, god-light dimmed. The crest of the hill is underwater. You have no boots.

         Morning dawns cold, clear, a watery gold. You are gone.
Unfinished, as these things often are.

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Thank you! :rose:
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014   Writer
That's very kind of you - thank you! :tighthug:
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Savaliste Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
Np :)
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MrWootton Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Yes.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014   Writer
:)
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fernknits Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The first line moves and fascinates me.  I would like to know more about what happens.  Consider expanding this, maybe?  
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014   Writer
I'm glad you like it. I'll certainly consider. :) 
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flummo Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Writer
There's just something about this and I really really like the title.
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014   Writer
:heart:
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weatherstained Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
As is, this piece is already very strong. 
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013   Writer
Well, thank you! :)
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RainyhawaiiV2 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think this would make a good collab, (unfortunately I've been in a little block) or a good start to something, good on its own too. :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013   Writer
Feel free to do whatever with when you get your groove back. :)
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's lovely, as is.
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013   Writer
Thank you. I'm glad you think so. :heart:
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. :heart:
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:iconarinadadragonspeaker:
Intriguing. I really like the "god-light dimmed" image. As well as the "watery gold" part. I'd love to know more about what happened to these characters.
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013   Writer
Thank you very much - I'm glad you like it! Maybe you will. :)
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cality Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is such an interesting scene; in fact, I feel like it almost creates a painting of some kind (I like your use of words like 'drenched' and 'watery gold', which do make me think of paintings). 
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013   Writer
Wow, what a beautiful complement! :love: Thank you so much. :heart:
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cality Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! :love:
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just a few very simple lines which manage to convey a wealth of story. This is a very intriguing little snippet, you should definitely consider adding to this. :)
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. :)
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013   Writer
:tighthug:
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takemetoverona Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student Writer
Intriguing... I like it.
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013   Writer
Thanks. :heart:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is very, very interesting. I'm wondering if you're looking to expand upon this idea....
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013   Writer
I don't know what's going to happen with this. But thank you. :)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Aah, I see. :nod:

And my pleasure. :)

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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013   Writer
:)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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TalonTali Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
IIkeit. Clever.I
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013   Writer
Thank you. :)
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TalonTali Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
Any time.
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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