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Vert velvet slippers
and a mouthful of water –
dragonflies flit by.


2.
Twin evergreen canes
support the elderly bridge;
an unsteady crone.


3.
Citronella flame,
illuminating fingers,
out-bites mosquitos.
A summer's day.

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glossolalias Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
your work has been featured here: [link] please go check out the other pieces & have a nice day :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013   Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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Adonael Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Short, sweet and fragmentary - always like how poems like these resemble memories. The alliteration near the start was effective :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013   Writer
Thank you, kindly. :)
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Adonael Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries :)
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
gorgeous. so nostalgic and summery.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   Writer
I'm glad you think so - thank you. :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lovely as always.

iii. is my favorite, I think.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   Writer
Thank you. :tighthug:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous imagery. Really paints the picture for me.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   Writer
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your imagery is sublime.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Writer
Thank you very much. :heart: But it's not hard to write such with such beautiful days on hand. :)
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vespera Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"out-bites mosquitos" :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful! I especially love the middle stanza. :star:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Writer
Thank you. :heart: I quite do too - and I also rather like the bridge itself, I swear! :lol:
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travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Very intriguing. Lovely job.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013   Writer
Thank you very much. :)
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InkPotOverflow Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013   Writer
Lovely.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013   Writer
Thank you. :)
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InkPotOverflow Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Writer
You're welcome
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