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Vert velvet slippers
and a mouthful of water –
dragonflies flit by.


2.
Twin evergreen canes
support the elderly bridge;
an unsteady crone.


3.
Citronella flame,
illuminating fingers,
out-bites mosquitos.
A summer's day.

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:iconglossolalias:
your work has been featured here: [link] please go check out the other pieces & have a nice day :heart:
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Concora Feb 2, 2013   Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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Adonael Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Short, sweet and fragmentary - always like how poems like these resemble memories. The alliteration near the start was effective :)
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Concora Jan 24, 2013   Writer
Thank you, kindly. :)
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Adonael Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries :)
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:iconglossolalias:
gorgeous. so nostalgic and summery.
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Concora Jan 14, 2013   Writer
I'm glad you think so - thank you. :heart:
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0hgravity Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lovely as always.

iii. is my favorite, I think.
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Concora Jan 14, 2013   Writer
Thank you. :tighthug:
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0hgravity Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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