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1.
Sinking sun
setting my bedroom alight:
summer sky-fire.


2.
Spiders hang prone;
abandoned marionettes,
many legs askew.


3.
Daylilies slumber
as darkness bades the
garden to sleep.
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Student General Artist
That is beautiful! I love your choice of words in the second one. :)
The first and third haiku (? sorry, not so good with higher literature in english^^) also has a quite calm atmosphere, which I like a lot. The second one is a little scary to me with that choice of word, but I like it all the same.
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Concora Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013   Writer
Thank you! The second is meant to be a little bit scary, so don't worry. :) I'm glad you thought the others were calm, that's the effect I wanted. Thank you, again! :tighthug:
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student General Artist
This is for sure a good balance: Calm, a little bit scary and then once again calm. :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013   Writer
Absolutely! :nod:
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
I love haikus. I also love beautiful haikus. That leaves me no choice to say I double-love your haikus. :D Great work.
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Concora Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013   Writer
Haha, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed. :hug:
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
You're welcome. You did a great job with the haikus. :)
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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Concora Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! :hug:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
You're welcome.
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