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The crying wind
brings a

deluge:

lost
and blurred at
the edges,
you

become

a
whisper.
NaPoWriMo 3

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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I suppose this poem reminds me of how painful it can be to realize that a memory of someone you hold (or held) dear is fading with time.

Lovely work.
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013   Writer
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it - and I'm glad you think that, as the word 'mizpah' refers to the emotional bond between those separated by distance or death. So you came to quite an apt interpretation. :)
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flummo Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student Writer
Ooh, gave me chills, that. And I love the word mizpah. :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013   Writer
Thank you! I can't think of the origin at the moment - it might be Biblical, actually - but it refers to the emotional bond between those separated by distance or death. It's a beautiful word. :love:
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flummo Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Writer
Yes. :heart:

I also read of this other, sorta related definition, but biblical as well, that it's a sort of goodbye without saying goodbye.
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013   Writer
That's a nice definition. And not quite so depressing.. =P
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flummo Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Student Writer
;)
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sherbetblooms Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is so perfect :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much. :heart:
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Beautiful constructed words with so much meaningful thoughts coming up in my mind. :)
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