May I know your thoughts to that one? Because, looking at all the others, it hasn't got the same feeling of being satisfied after reading the words like you are when you eat enough and it is rather different of that that i already know of your poetry. But I like the Hunter part best, "A sky of fleeing stars" is my favourite line.
I think maybe it's because these two little haikus don't really mean anything to me, so they don't hold the same sort of emotional impact as some of my other poems do. I'm sorry for that! But I'm glad you like a little bit of them, at least.