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The Hunter

         Orion's prey—
         a sky of fleeing stars:
         dawn.


Chiron

         Sagittarius:
         the archer's arrow,
         piercing eventide.
Haven't written anything in ages. Just a little somethin' somethin'.

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zippip Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Both very subtle and beautiful. Well done.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013   Writer
Thank you very much for the lovely complements - glad you enjoyed. :love:
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BlackfireSouls Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student General Artist
May I know your thoughts to that one? Because, looking at all the others, it hasn't got the same feeling of being satisfied after reading the words like you are when you eat enough and it is rather different of that that i already know of your poetry.
But I like the Hunter part best, "A sky of fleeing stars" is my favourite line. :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013   Writer
I think maybe it's because these two little haikus don't really mean anything to me, so they don't hold the same sort of emotional impact as some of my other poems do. :) I'm sorry for that! But I'm glad you like a little bit of them, at least. :tighthug:
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cality Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous! It's so hushed and delicate; a beautiful poem. I adore the lines 'a sky of fleeing stars:' and 'piercing eventide.'. :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much for the lovely words. :tighthug: You are too kind. I'm glad you enjoyed this! :heart:
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cality Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :huggle:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013   Writer
:eager:!
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miceechojelly Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
Wow, your poems left me breathless! So little words, but so much beauty!
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Concora Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013   Writer
Wow, thank you so much for such a beautiful complement! :love:
I'm glad you enjoyed them. :tighthug:
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zwecat Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013   Digital Artist
I love this. >< I love astrology/stars/stuff and this is just great.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much!
I'm glad you like it. :tighthug: :heart:

Me too!
I'm constantly writing about it. I just can't help it. :giggle:
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sherbetblooms Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
so pretty :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013   Writer
Thank you!
:tighthug: :heart:
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Cloud-and-Petrichor Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stunning.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013   Writer
:heart:!
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I love stars :heart: Also, I really enjoy the last line of this, "piercing eventide." Those words just go so well together for some reason.
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Concora Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013   Writer
Me too. :heart:

Thank you! I like how they fit together as well.
Glad you enjoyed! :tighthug:
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wordeea Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lovely !!
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Concora Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013   Writer
I'm glad you think so! :tighthug: :heart:
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!! :heart: It exhales peace and an ethereal state. :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. I'm glad you enjoyed. :tighthug: :heart:
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :tighthug: :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013   Writer
:happybounce: :love:
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