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Black and blue,

skin and sky—
water down the drain,
I say

as the red line of dawn
breaks over skeleton trees and

the
windowpanes
shake with

you.
Ugh.
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
'skin and sky—
water down the drain,
I say'

I like how the voice came across in this.
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012   Writer
Thank you. :)
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No worries!
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
as the red line of dawn
breaks over skeleton trees


Amazing image there. <3
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012   Writer
I'm glad you think so. Thank you. :heart:
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:icondisrhythmic:
disrhythmic Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Welcome! <3
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Concora Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012   Writer
:huggle:
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Cloud-and-Petrichor Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is simply stunning :rose:
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012   Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Jess you once again leave me breathless with this amazing piece! :star:
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