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Sacred skin
where heavens and ocean
collide,

an imprint on salted lungs
an echo

of aching, of
a moonlit yearning upon the
rolling tide.
Drifting...

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Thank you so much! :heart:
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
wow - :clap:
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Concora Featured By Owner May 12, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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TheBloodyEpicPumpkin Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student Writer
I used your title in a found poem: [link]
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Concora Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013   Writer
Oooh! :)
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Professional Writer
beautiful
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Concora Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013   Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
I'm with ~winterkate--gorgeous rhythm. <3
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012   Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Welcome. <3
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winterkate Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
I love how you use the line breaks here to create a rhythm. Very nice.
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012   Writer
I'm sorry for the late reply, but thank you very much! :heart:
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winterkate Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
You're really welcome! Lol, I know all about lateness - no problem!
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cerealnovels Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
Beautiful!
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012   Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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SaphirePZ Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really liked this (:
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Thank you - I'm glad. :hug:
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
This is such a pretty little piece... :D I love the symbols and the flow!
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much! :huggle:
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome! :cuddle:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much! :glomp:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
You're welcome.
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doublethefun Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
I love this!!
"an imprint on salted lungs
an echo

of aching"
Perfect word choice.
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Oh, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :heart:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Absolutely gorgeous. :heart:
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Thank you. :heart::heart:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
You're most welcome! :la: :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lovely little piece.
I heard sounds of the ocean between stanzas.
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:iconconcora:
Concora Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Ah, thank you very much! :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you have the most beautiful picture poems :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Ah, thank you. :heart:
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DoveThunder Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
This is a gorgeous piece. You do such a great job creating atmosphere- I just can't get over it. It's the same beautiful feeling every time, but expressed differently. Wonderful imagery, wonderful title, wonderful shiny aftertaste. If poems have aftertastes, that is- I suppose in a way they do. :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Oh, you have no idea how happy your comments make me - thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoy my work! :heart:

And yes, I suppose that writing does have an aftertaste to it! Intriguing. :) Thank you, once again! :huggle:
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DoveThunder Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
You're welcome! I'm lucky to know a poet like you- and I'm glad it makes you happy. :aww:
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012   Writer
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silver-ships-fly Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
simply beautiful :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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