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Slumbering suns
take a midmorning nap;
alleyways bright with
golden ladies,

their smiles canal-deep.
Nightfall brings guides:
stone sighs and dead light,
(never so alive).
One of my great loves, Venice. :heart:

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Phoenixin55 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Never been out of Oz, Concora Paint the world in words for us....
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Concora Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013   Writer
I will try my best. :heart:
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VFreie Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
I'm one of those few, crazy people who don't really like Venice all that much, but I do like the imagery in this poem a lot: particular love for the break between the stanzas, it makes the transition flow as natural as a sunset. :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013   Writer
Ah, a brave confession! ;)

Thank you, though, for such a lovely comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this! :heart:
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DoveThunder Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
...wow. And that is all. Save that you snatched my breath right out of my chest.
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Concora Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013   Writer
Oh. :heart:
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vespera Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love the title you picked (instead of "Venice") :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013   Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have featured this piece in my journal: [link]

♥!
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Concora Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013   Writer
:heart:!
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