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Desert hands tell tales
of a hundred arid summers, but
you are no longer as cloudless as they

(there is a storm
creeping through blue, blue veins).

But tell the sky to keep her sorrow,
that grey cascade blurring against
eyelids and horizons;

and suppress her misbegotten
droplets, seeping into the sodden
ground underfoot—

for there is still sun in your sky eyes.
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The blindness of blue, blue eyes.

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Mood: Love ~black-fire-dragoness Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like that one a lot because there is some sort of tension in me when reading it. Perhaps because of the words "storm" "vein""desert"and the whole third part is chillin. Beautiful!
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*Concora Mar 20, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much. :heart: I'm glad (well, not glad, but you know what I mean :P) that the heaviness I felt whilst writing this has translated through. Thank you, once again. :huggle:
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So beautiful.

(there is a storm
creeping through blue, blue veins).


I got chills. :heart:
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*Concora Oct 28, 2012   Writer
Thank you (once again!) for taking the time to read this. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :huggle:
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*halcyonshores Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is Gorgeous.
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*Concora Oct 19, 2012   Writer
Oh, thank you. :heart:
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*halcyonshores Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart::heart:
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=LadyofGaerdon Oct 17, 2012  Professional Writer
:wave: Hi! You have been featured by The Favorites Project at #LITplease!
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*Concora Oct 19, 2012   Writer
:heart:!
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