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  some
  days I
   watch you
 rise and rage
with a new year
firework fervour–
untamed and glorious,
pulling the years together
with  a snap of  your fingers.
but some days you are languid,
stretching like the summer dusting
of freckles along your forearms, the
slumberous strands of hair shuttering
your sky-eyes from the morning light.
on these days, I think the earth spins
slower and the birds sing a little
quieter. on these days, I look
at you and I think:
sundrop.
NaNoWriMo 14
Inspired slightly by this lovely piece: [link]

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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner May 5, 2013   Writer
I have featured your lovely poem here: [link]
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Concora Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! :hug:
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brain-tree Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013   General Artist
This is so nice, great work :)
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much - I'm glad you enjoyed! :)
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013   General Artist
goodness, how you take my breath away, jessie love! :tighthug: :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013   Writer
:huggle:
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:love:
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is gorgeous. I really love the last few lines. Glad to have been an inspiration, though your formatting is way better than mine! :giggle:
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it.
(And no, no, no, yours is wonderful)
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome!
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013   Writer
:huggle:
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v-espertine Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
you're wonderful
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
:heart:!
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Haanyaan Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Writer
visually and literally stunning.
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! :thanks: :heart:
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Haanyaan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student Writer
you're very welcome ^^ :meow: :iconblueheartplz:
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
:tighthug:
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Haanyaan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student Writer
:iconaawplz:
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Haanyaan Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Writer
literarily(??)
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous.
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much. :thanks: :heart:
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vespera Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I 3rd ~ohgravity's comment
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
Thank you. :)
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flummo Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Writer
Ditto *0hgravity, that's pretty much what I wanted to say. :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
:tighthug:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow. not only is the formatting beautifully done, a pleasure to look at, but the words within are lovely.
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! :hug: :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome, as always ^^ I love your work.
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013   Writer
:hug:
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Beutiful work
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013   Writer
Thank you. :)
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Beautiful! And the formatting is cool XD
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013   Writer
Thank you! :huggle:
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West-117 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Wow, very nice
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013   Writer
Thank you very much. :)
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hazeltown Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you are my favorite
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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