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 n
  some
  days I
   watch you
 rise and rage
with a new year
firework fervour–
untamed and glorious,
pulling the years together
with  a snap of  your fingers.
but some days you are languid,
stretching like the summer dusting
of freckles along your forearms, the
slumberous strands of hair shuttering
your sky-eyes from the morning light.
on these days, I think the earth spins
slower and the birds sing a little
quieter. on these days, I look
at you and I think:
sundrop.
NaNoWriMo 14
Inspired slightly by this lovely piece: [link]

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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner May 5, 2013   Writer
I have featured your lovely poem here: [link]
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Thank you so much! :hug:
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This is so nice, great work :)
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Thank you so much - I'm glad you enjoyed! :)
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goodness, how you take my breath away, jessie love! :tighthug: :heart:
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:love:
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Wow, this is gorgeous. I really love the last few lines. Glad to have been an inspiration, though your formatting is way better than mine! :giggle:
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it.
(And no, no, no, yours is wonderful)
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You're very welcome!
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you're wonderful
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:heart:!
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Haanyaan Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Writer
visually and literally stunning.
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much! :thanks: :heart:
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you're very welcome ^^ :meow: :iconblueheartplz:
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:tighthug:
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Haanyaan Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Writer
literarily(??)
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Gorgeous.
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Concora Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much. :thanks: :heart:
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I 3rd ~ohgravity's comment
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Thank you. :)
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Ditto *0hgravity, that's pretty much what I wanted to say. :heart:
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:tighthug:
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wow. not only is the formatting beautifully done, a pleasure to look at, but the words within are lovely.
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Thank you so much! :hug: :heart:
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welcome, as always ^^ I love your work.
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:hug:
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Beutiful work
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Thank you. :)
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Beautiful! And the formatting is cool XD
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Thank you! :huggle:
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Wow, very nice
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Thank you very much. :)
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you are my favorite
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