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August 19, 2015
Sundrop by Concora is a fine example of how even the simplest shape can create a powerful concrete poem. 
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o  
 n
  some
  days I
   watch you
 rise and rage
with a new year
firework fervour–
untamed and glorious,
pulling the years together
with  a snap of  your fingers.
but some days you are languid,
stretching like the summer dusting
of freckles along your forearms, the
slumberous strands of hair shuttering
your sky-eyes from the morning light.
on these days, I think the earth spins
slower and the birds sing a little
quieter. on these days, I look
at you and I think:
sundrop.
NaNoWriMo 14
Inspired slightly by this lovely piece: [link]

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Magky's avatar
Wow!! Beautiful